The Surprise Party
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4.9 Stars (140)

The Surprise Party

Written by Ahana Rana
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Helen, the hamburger, was sleeping in bed. Suddenly the alarm clock rang, and she woke up with a startle. Helen looked at the clock and gasped as she was late for school.  ...

Genre : Me & My Family

Category : Imagination

Total Pages : 49

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Ahana RanaI am 7 years old and studying in Grade 2. I love nature and spending time with plants and animals. Reading adventure books is what I like. I want to become a chef when I grow up.
Readers’ Reviews (140)

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Mohammad Abdul KareemSat, Jul 8th 2023, 7:18 PM

Really gr8 imagination at this tender age..

Nitin groverSat, Mar 11th 2023, 1:03 PM

Writing this masterpiece at such tender age is divine. 3 cheers for the champ and kudos to proud parents

Nishi ailawadiMon, Mar 6th 2023, 4:14 PM

An amazing and beautifully written book !! Keep it up ☺️☺️

Preeti Mon, Mar 6th 2023, 1:06 PM

An amazing book.

Pankaj Sat, Mar 4th 2023, 10:33 AM

Beautifully written book. Full of creativity. One should read it.

Vandana Sat, Mar 4th 2023, 10:32 AM

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Arpit Fri, Mar 3rd 2023, 11:24 PM

Excellent read.. !

Rashi Fri, Mar 3rd 2023, 7:16 PM

Excellent beta. Amazing and beautifully drafted. Keep it up.

ASHOK KUMAR GOYALFri, Mar 3rd 2023, 6:39 PM

I got this book and my kids are not ready to leave this book. They're loving the way it's articulated and designed. The idea of personifying food items is epic, it gives an exposure to the imagination. Keep it up author. I wish you luck.

amit pahwaFri, Mar 3rd 2023, 6:39 PM

Amazing book. A must read for all the kids. My toddlers absolutely loved this. Hatsoff to the author

Deepa pahwaFri, Mar 3rd 2023, 6:31 PM

Great talent at this age really good imagination

Hamsa Fri, Mar 3rd 2023, 12:34 PM

Very nice book😊

Ranjitha Fri, Mar 3rd 2023, 12:33 PM

Incredible thing done by a 7 years old child.... Hat's off to you... MR. Sanjay Kharinta

Vikas Thu, Mar 2nd 2023, 2:08 PM

Kudos to Ahana for penning such a wonderful book at this age. Look forward to read more from the budding writer.

Saumil GahlawatWed, Mar 1st 2023, 8:17 AM

Fun & Insightful

Rajat GirdharMon, Feb 20th 2023, 5:22 PM

It's an amazing read, written by a young author and for sure she has a bright future ahead.

Pankaj GoyalMon, Feb 20th 2023, 5:22 PM

Congratulations Ahana.Very imaginative and well written story. I liked Helen the hamburger as she is kind, courageous and wise. The book ends with a positive note.

Sunita JainFri, Feb 17th 2023, 10:21 PM

It is wonderful to read 'The Surprise Party'.Delicious dishes personified ensure that her dream of becoming a chef will come true.

Mrs MeeraWed, Feb 15th 2023, 1:38 PM

Great job Ahana! Such great effort at this young age. Keep up the good work!

Joy Sat, Feb 11th 2023, 8:18 PM

Excellent imagination by Ahana. Such a wonderful thought at this young age. Keep it up !

Rajat Thu, Feb 9th 2023, 7:27 PM

Wonderful read. Great writing Ahana. Looking forward to more stories 🙂!

Siva Kumar TanguduMon, Feb 6th 2023, 2:33 PM

Excellent

Rajinder Sun, Feb 5th 2023, 5:37 PM

Overwhelmed to see the child’s efforts and thinking. Keep it up beta!

OP RathiThu, Feb 2nd 2023, 11:12 PM

Well done. Great efforts at this age with bundle of imagination creativity and fantasy Keep it up

I J MehtaThu, Feb 2nd 2023, 7:45 PM

Excellent imagination by Ahana. Such a wonderful thought at this young age. Keep it up !

Harbans Lal KukrejaThu, Feb 2nd 2023, 5:47 PM

Love the way you used the words . it’s a beautiful gift .Keep shinning and keep writing. Looking forward for more from you. Love you Princess💕

Kanchi JoshiTue, Jan 31st 2023, 7:20 PM

Excellent imagination and articulation by Ahana! Looks like we have a Booker contender in the making. Keep it up!

Abhinav YMon, Jan 30th 2023, 3:05 PM

Excellent Book by Ahana. Such a wonderful thought at this young age. God Bless Her

SHYAM KUMAR AGGARWALSun, Jan 29th 2023, 12:29 PM

Ahana has done a wonderful job. Will be happy to see more in future. Best wishes to Ahana🌷

Pushpa Sat, Jan 28th 2023, 3:58 PM

This is highly inspirational to see Ahana’s imagination and creative thought process.

Harsh SethiSat, Jan 28th 2023, 11:44 AM

Really Great ! Very interesting to read. That too from the pen of a little author. Stupendous!!

Dr Anil Kumar SinglaFri, Jan 27th 2023, 8:07 PM

Excellent work, the story is really engaging. Author has done a terrific work.

Neelam YadavThu, Jan 26th 2023, 10:32 PM

Great work by a small kid. Keep it up 👍

Parul YadavThu, Jan 26th 2023, 9:35 PM

Good job. Keep it up.

Shwetabh Mon, Jan 23rd 2023, 4:59 PM

Well done. Really amazing. Keep it up

Krishnaraj VMon, Jan 23rd 2023, 9:05 AM

I appreciate your efforts worth reading keep it up

Neeraj Sun, Jan 22nd 2023, 4:34 PM

Excellent work done. Great way of imagination at such a small age. Keep the good work going. Much much appreciated :)

Anita Sun, Jan 22nd 2023, 1:00 PM

Wonderful job Ahana 👌!! Appreciate the storyline as well the choice of words in making the story. Wish you great heights in writing and looking forward for more.

RAJESH MSun, Jan 22nd 2023, 7:43 AM

Excellent work..keep it up beta...

Jyoti KukrejaSat, Jan 21st 2023, 10:42 PM

Nice

Vikram Sat, Jan 21st 2023, 3:52 PM

Wonderful imagination, transports you to a different world…. Way to go Ahana!!!! Congratulations

gunmeet premSat, Jan 21st 2023, 11:57 AM

Great work, Ahana! Keep it up

Nilaksh BajpaiSat, Jan 21st 2023, 10:59 AM

So beautifully written. Love the imagination of a 7 year old.

Nupur Sat, Jan 21st 2023, 8:52 AM

This is great ! Well done... Excellent work ! Keep it up 👍

Nidhi ChhabraFri, Jan 20th 2023, 5:53 PM

Excellent work. Keep it up.

Rupika Fri, Jan 20th 2023, 11:25 AM

Young Ahana as we know her from her very young age has been a brilliant thinker and a smart writer . Another Brilliant piece . All the best lil Princess❤️❤️

Toji Fri, Jan 20th 2023, 7:05 AM

Great work. All the very best dear ahana. Wish you a great success

Anshu Thu, Jan 19th 2023, 6:42 PM

Excellent read and well written dear Ahana, penning down ur thoughts at this young age is commendable. Keep going .

Dr MadhulikaThu, Jan 19th 2023, 8:27 AM

Brilliant work. Keep it up.

Reena KujrejaWed, Jan 18th 2023, 2:55 PM

Amazingly created by a 7 year old kid. Must read. Looking for many more from Ahana. All the best :)

Yougant TanejaWed, Jan 18th 2023, 1:08 PM

Amazing Writeup.....surprised to read a fabulous book by 7 yr Ahana....Great work..great imagination.. your journey started at 7 itself...many more to go...All the very best for many more

Priya Wed, Jan 18th 2023, 9:34 AM

Wonderful book …. Very well written by little star Ahana 🎉🎉

Supila Tue, Jan 17th 2023, 7:49 PM

Well done. All the best ahead. Blessings and blessings.

Sudhir kumar ChawlaTue, Jan 17th 2023, 5:26 PM

Must read, Beautifully written and I am amazed with your imagination Ahana... Keep it up, God bless u

Sonia KukrejaTue, Jan 17th 2023, 5:04 PM

Very well penned Ahana! Keep up the good work. May Lord Krishna keep you blessed. Looking forward to your next creation. Lots of love- Ritu

Ritu Tue, Jan 17th 2023, 4:29 PM

Keep it up aahna!!! It's a great achievement at such a young age.. i pray to god that you achieve greater success in life...

Abhishek khemkaTue, Jan 17th 2023, 10:13 AM

Beautifully written and amazing imagination. Keep it up Ahana.

Virender SinghMon, Jan 16th 2023, 10:01 PM

Wonderful book ..keep it up

Punita rRaniMon, Jan 16th 2023, 8:41 PM

Amazing, very nicely written. Awesome inspiration for many people. God bless

Kunal ManochaMon, Jan 16th 2023, 8:10 PM

Beautifully written, imaginative skills excellent, superb writing, Great going! Congratulations Dear😘

Rachna Mon, Jan 16th 2023, 5:32 PM

I was totally amazed reading the creative piece of writing by 7yrs old. Congratulations to you child as you are nurturing creativity and imagination skill at this age. Keep it up. Really excited to read more from you. God bless you child.

Reena KukrejaMon, Jan 16th 2023, 1:06 PM

Beautiful creativity and imagination penned down by little Ahana. Kudos for writing such a wonderful and interesting book at such a young age. Enjoyed the food world keep it Ahana

Sunita Mon, Jan 16th 2023, 12:17 PM

I can't really imagine such a tender kid doing a miracle like this. The book is exemplary and worth applauding. I genuinely recommend everyone to have a read. Kudos champ! You're gonna rock!

Shweta AilawadiMon, Jan 16th 2023, 11:42 AM

Surprise party is a real surprise to me to know 7 yrs old kid writing this stuff , what a vocabulary and choice of words , moulding the foodstuff I to characters, beyond imagination Aahna Rana. Congrats. Best wishes. Keep it up dear

Yogesh SunejaMon, Jan 16th 2023, 10:37 AM

Great book! Must read for everyone

Rishi KhuranaMon, Jan 16th 2023, 10:29 AM

Amazing story, Excellent writing. Highly recommend. 👍🏻

Saurabh GuliaMon, Jan 16th 2023, 10:08 AM

Amazing book imagination of a 7 yesr old and the way she has Narrated pen down her thoughts .very creative ,keep it up

Prakash KirpalaniMon, Jan 16th 2023, 10:01 AM

Its just awesome amazing !! Written so beautifully which keeps you engaged. Kudos to you!!

Sana Mon, Jan 16th 2023, 9:55 AM

The plot of the book is really engaging. It's amazing to see such creativity from such an early author. Keep it up Ahana!

Ankul Mon, Jan 16th 2023, 8:11 AM

Ahana’s writing is engaging and accessible, making complex scientific concepts easy to understand for a lay audience. He also manages to imbue the trees with a sense of individuality and personality, making for a truly captivating read.

Anshuman Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 10:59 PM

Really amazing work by Ahana!! Looking forward to more publishings ♡

Nandini SharmaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 10:54 PM

Amazingly written by this little angel for guy like me who loves getting lost in the beauty of nature. Also, I am a huge animal lover so it was very nice. This book reminded me of my beautiful childhood memories.

Sahilrawat Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 10:37 PM

It's an amazing read, to be engulfed in nature through text is a perfect example of what will happen if u read this book.

Anshuman SharmaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 10:36 PM

Really an amazing experience reading this book ❤️ Commendable work 🔥

Kashish GabaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 10:01 PM

At the age when most kids are learning to read, she has written such a beautiful book. It is inspiring.

Ashish ChauhanSun, Jan 15th 2023, 9:35 PM

Very nice book Ahana!! What a lovely creativity!! At such a young age, you have put together your imagination into a wonderful narrative and very beautifully portrayed the story. No doubt you would become a great author in the future. Keep it up!!

Shruti MantriSun, Jan 15th 2023, 8:02 PM

What a wonderful creativity. It was thrilling too. Amazing from a 7 year old. All the best Ahana !!! Shankar Umamaheshwaran

Shankar Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 6:00 PM

The budding author has done an amazing job with her creative writing skills. Way to go Ahaana!

Vartika dixitSun, Jan 15th 2023, 5:37 PM

Such a cute and wonderful book. Amazing ideas and wonderful writing by 7 year old girl. Hats off for her creativity and talent.

Drakshayani Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 5:33 PM

The story is amazing. The characters are loveable. It is written beautifully by Ahana. It is a breezy and delightful read. She has a bright future. Awaiting more books. A must read. #5stars

Shefali ChughSun, Jan 15th 2023, 5:25 PM

Amazing imagination and beautifully expressed . At such a tender age valuing the nature is a good sign of a budding writer . Language used also very impressive . Highly recommend

Jyothi Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 5:13 PM

It is such a cute and beautiful book. The most special part is that it is written by a 7 year old. Love her creativity and imagination♥️

Rahul GuwalaniSun, Jan 15th 2023, 5:02 PM

Excellent Ahana Keep it up

BIDHI CHAND RANASun, Jan 15th 2023, 3:18 PM

Very beautifully written by Ahana ,she is so talented that in this age she has written a book ,♥️

Kanishka Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 2:59 PM

Amazingingly beautiful expressions of thoughts.

Seema Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 2:57 PM

Amazing and Kudos to Aahana! How beautifully penning by a young little girl. A must read by everyone!

Smita SinghSun, Jan 15th 2023, 2:00 PM

A must read for any book lover. Highly recommended. 5 stars.

yogesh manglaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 1:26 PM

A superb piece of writing at such a young age. Wonderful thoughts penned down in the most efficient manner. Good job, highly recommended 👍🏼

Sheeba SinghSun, Jan 15th 2023, 1:26 PM

Interesting story. Amazing ideas and wonderful writing. Highly recommended.

Kamlesh KukrejaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:59 PM

Cute interesting read. It’s amazing to see how young kids are writing amazing books. Lots of talent out there.

Karan KhuranaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:56 PM

Amazing story. Excellent writing and top class imagination. Highly recommend. 5 stars.

Ajit Kumar KukrejaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:43 PM

Wow such an amazing read! Author's imagination was really creative. Way to go!

Amit Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:32 PM

Excellent writing. A story for all ages. This one is a page turner. Highly recommended. 5 stars. This author will be a best seller.

Ashish KukrejaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:28 PM

Our creative lil star

Anjana RanaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 12:03 PM

Kudos to Ahana for penning down a fantastic adventure. The story is really intriguing and exciting to read. Love how author's imagination breaks away mental barriers and transports us to a different world.

Aditi Sun, Jan 15th 2023, 11:56 AM

Amazing imagination of a 7 year old. Wonderful to see such a young author weaving intricate story line and taking the reader through an amazing adventure.

Ahana RanaSun, Jan 15th 2023, 11:44 AM