The Mysterious Explosion

I'm wonder struck about how a young girl can write a story so well. The usage of words and expressions are really good. I LOVED IT! From the characters to the storyline...everything was PERFECT! Keep writing good stuff Amelia!

Kudos to the young author for attempting this challenge and fairing pretty well at that! Very Impressive Amelia 👏

Amelia has just made the vacations one to look forward to with her amazing debut book! Her vivid imagination and story arc is what writers will break their heads for. There is excitement, buildups and sentences, and a page turner.

It’s wonderful to see Amelia taking her first tentative step to the world of literature. So proud of her and her writing. Waiting to see what she has in store for us in the future. Keep reading. Keep evolving.

Wonderful job! You have portrayed the characters and narrated very well.I enjoyed reading and the beginning really grabbed my attention.The plot twist was amazing and this proves your talent, writing this book.Eagerly waiting for the next book.

Congratulations Amelia! Loved everything about the book. I really appreciate your narration and vocabulary. Such a great work at this age. Keep writing :)

Wisdom is divine, and I could find many places in this book which was very wisely narrated, and that coming from a 13 year old is just amazing. Hope to see many more such wonders from this young mind.

It is amazing to think how great of a writer Bebu is! Reading this book brought me lotsa shock seeing how well bebu could write! This book had an amazing plot, and I'm happy I was one of the main characters! With love forever, Aanya

A very exciting and engrossing mystery adventure. Well done, Bebu ( Amelia) , you have used your imagination and writing skills to make a wonderful novel. May your talents increase, keep writing many more mystery thrillers!

This book is well written and articulated in simple language. Appreciate the skill of author in interweaving the reality, experience and imagination into one exciting journey.

Excellent work.

Hi Amelia sister. I loved reading your book. Keep writing more boke. All the best .

Excellent writing. Congratulations. The way of narration is awesome. Appreciated authors visualisation and imagination. Keep writing.

Excellent book! Excellent narration. Congratulations. Wishing you all the best.

Bebo dear, Was pleasantly surprised reading the book. At your age, to be so imaginative, is a blessing. Lived the narration. Hope to see many more from you.

Loved it!! Brilliant writing. The way Amelia paints each scene with narratives and detailing of thoughts, characters and even small things creates a wonderful imagery and visualization in your mind. Couldn't put down the book once I started.

Congratulations Bebu!!! (Amelia 😊) Very good narrative, especially when building up the scenes in each chapter. Your vocabulary and selection of words are amazing. Best wishes. Continue writing..

The author's vivid imagination paints clear images that make you feel like you are watching a movie! The fictional detective plot ties together realistic adventures, suspense and chases that take you on an exciting journey with "The Cool Cousins".

The story was very realistically written and used vivid imagery that was an absolute joy to read :) At one point I was 100 percent convinced this story really happened it was that good! Keep writing please !

Very interesting story. Once I started reading it, I did not feel like putting it down.

Great book

Very well written, Bebu !! The lines evoked vivid images in my mind and at the same time they made my heart racing with anxiety. And you do have a way with words. I was amazed by the rich vocabulary and the expressions you've used. Keep writing !!!

Excellent writing

All the best to you, keep it up.

Congratulations Bebu! Wishing you the very best. God bless

The best book I’ve ever read ,love it

Excellent writing..seems like we are living through the book. Well done.