Penny and the Phoenix
Penny was on a dangerous mission to rescue the last living Phoenix that was in danger of being captured by hunters. She was brave enough to go across the sea to save them. She knew that the Phoenix wa...
Genre : Me & My Family
Category : Imagination
Total Pages : 43
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Congratulations Allison on your first published book. Very well written. Loved all the characters. Eagerly waiting for Penny's next adventure.
Way to go Allison. It was amazing to read about the young, brave and adventurous Penny. I hope Penny and you also inspire many girls and boys to find their adventurous side..kudos to you and can't wait to read what Penny does next.
Allison was able to create such a wonderful world with beautiful creatures and action packed adventures. And the subtle humour makes it an interesting read. Keep up the good work, cant wait to read Penny’s next adventure.
Allison's imagination+ability to express is truly impressive- with such mature writing. Her decision of resting the story on a female protagonist shows how she has been brought up by the right women acting as role models to her. Loved the book!!
Allison narrated how Penny saved Phoenix bird with help of Dolphin, Pegasus, Dragen, Hunter. She demonstrated act of Penny to help, using skill sets of above characters. She kept doors open to write on Penny’s new adventures. Shivaprasad Chhatre
Wonderful imagination little one😊😊😊😊
Good job Allison!! Amazing writing skills at this age... waiting for ur next book 😊
What a thrilling story. So much attention to detail too! Well-written, Allison. Looking forward to reading more of your well-written stories. All the best!
Thank you Allison for such a wonderful story ❤️ My daughter enjoyed reading it 😊
Good job Allison! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more of Penny's adventures!
Very well written, Allison! Loved reading about Penny's adventure. Waiting to read about Penny's new adventures! All the best!
Very well written book with good imagination and thought process. Use of simple language and pics means kids will simply love it.
The book is a well written children's story with cute vibrant illustrations.
Well written Allison! Keep it up! 👍
Young minds of India expressing their views and imagination must be strongly supported to bring out the genius in them. All the very best, Allison! Looking forward to reading the next one 🤩
Very well written. Your imagination is surreal at this age
Congratulations Allison on your first book! May you write more and more fascinating stories and mark a place in the world with your words. To many, many more imaginary worlds!!
Well done Allison, keep up the good work. Loved reading your story and all your imagination n ideas. God bless you.
Very well written and use of simple and understandable words without compromising on the quality of the writing
Great job Allison. My son loves phoenix stories and he enjoyed reading how Penny saved it. Keep writing.
Excellent story. Would eagerly wait for reading about Penny's next adventures. Great work Allison, please keep writing.
Super. Vivid imagination
You completely captured my imagination with the first few pages itself.... Keep it up Allison
I am totally captivated by the first few pages I just read, thanks so much Allison Moniz.
What a beautifully written story. Looking forward to reading about Penny's next adventures. Can't wait to read more of your books, Allison.
Very well done Allison! Loved reading about Penny's adventure. Keep it up!
Loved her imagination!! Well written and good flow to the story.
Well done, Allison! Waiting to read more of your books. Great imagination.
Very well written! A must read!
Such an interesting story! Very well written, Allison. Looking forward to reading more of Penny’s adventures.
Very well written article Good flow of words and excellent imagination
Very lovely imagination, well written
Brilliant work Allison! It's wonderful to know that you are passionate about nature and our planet's fascinating wildlife :)
Loved the story of courageous Penny and her friends. It is a well written book. Vera
Well written Allison
Must say that author has great imagination.. beautifully written and is engaging story. Exceptionally good.
Amazing book! I absolutely loved reading it! Allison has a very creative and imaginative mind and the narrative was so captivating! Looking forward to reading more of her books!