The place behind the clouds
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A house stood on the edge of the beach. Columns raised the floor, sinking into the piling sand below, fine as crushed pearls. Behind the white-painted porch railing stood an easel and a man. Tom gazed...
Genre : Science Fiction
Category : Magic
Total Pages : 45
Ayla MondayHi, I'm Ayla. I'm fifteen years old and love storytelling and writing. It's my dream to publish a book series one day, so hopefully, this is another stepping stone towards that. Thank you for choosing my story to read. I hope you enjoy it.
Readers’ Reviews (3)
Captivating word pictures, flowing like poetry. I was transported into Ayla's images of richness and beauty. Deeply soothing and satisfying.
Eli EzraSat, May 13th 2023, 9:15 PM
קראתי את הסיפור שכתוב ומנוסח ברמה גבוה מאוד סיפור מרגש, עם הרבה מסרים חכמים שמותיר אותך עם מחשבה… I read your story, which is written in a high level. It is an emotional story, with intelligent life lessons, that left me with food for thought…
Sigal Sat, May 13th 2023, 8:59 PM
Very creative story. Really touched a cord. Also loved the message it teaches.
Galit RiederFri, May 12th 2023, 7:09 PM