
Chapter 1: A Girl with a Warm SmilePari was a ten-year-old girl with a smile that felt like sunshine.Every morning,she prayed to God, she waved at her neighbours, enjoyed going to school,greet her fri...
Genre : Emotions & Feelings
Category : Emotions
Total Pages : 33
Congratulations on publishing your very first book. At this age, you’ve already achieved something that many people dreams about. This is just the beginning of your journey as a writer. Keep writing.
Excellent, keep it up
Persis you have simply nailed it! You have very nicely put down your imagination in your words. It was wonderful read. Looking forward to many more stories from you.
Pari's story is a must-read for kids and adults alike. This young author's creativity will inspire you ⭐️ A heartwarming tale with a strong message, written with impressive skill by a talented 10-year-old. Lovely reading!!!
Amazing! Enjoyed reading!
Congratulations! Persis ....Writing a book takes so much hard work and imagination. You should be incredibly proud of this amazing achievement!
Proud of you dear. Your imagination, your hard work, and your beautiful ideas shine in every chapter. Keep dreaming big...
A brilliantly executed debut filled with wonderful characters and a surprisingly clever plot. I can't wait to see what this talented 10-year-old author writes next.
